The secret life of a ginger beer plant

Liquid languor of converse flavours,
spooned and stirred nightly.
 

Pepper-sweet swirl of pungent water-waltz
spirals, lifts and dips.
 

Sink-settles, rests; sated,
content, concentrated.
 

Reawaken to commune
on sediment of aromatic ritual.
 
 

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14 Comments

Filed under Couplets, Free Verse, Poetry

14 responses to “The secret life of a ginger beer plant

  1. Slava Zaitsev

    Very musical, evokes faint ( homeopathic?:-) memories …. color —> shape —> aroma, all in one verse, diluted in each other. Thank you! Slava

  2. Mmm, now that’s a poem I really could drink up. 😉 Lovely, dreamy little work my friend!

  3. Emma

    Love this Julie…such musical words bubbling and bouncing 🙂

  4. hedgewitch

    Very fluid–sorry, couldn’t help that. ;_) This is very much a poem of the senses, all smells and sensations and vivid image–just lovely, and also original and tasty. I like the alliteration of sink-settles, too–very satisfying to say out loud.

  5. nice…i like the minimalism in your lines…the second stanza is my fav…the girl dancing…makes for a great image that also plays well against the plant…

  6. This teases the tongue, reads well.

  7. Having only ever tried ginger ale and not ginger beer, actually looked up the ginger beer plant. Am always amazed with your writing, Julie.You can make even a beverage sound soft and sensual–“liquid langour”… sounds good to me!

  8. Becky Kilsby

    Tang and cloudy satisfaction… potent brew Julie. Handled with style.

  9. Fine distillation of a complex flavor, and from the inside to boot (as in, what this all tastes like from the heart.) Very polished effort. – Brendan

  10. alone that title is pure poetry julie..not a word too much here…all floats and connects in your very own precision..and makes me really thirsty…
    …and i love the new pic…

  11. Drinking in the sounds and dancing on the bubbles. What an intoxicating poem!

  12. profound, well done.

    Hello,
    How is your day?

    Glad to land here,
    Amazing poetic muses shared,
    Smiles.

    Welcome joining us for poets rally week 57,
    A random poem or a free verse is okay.
    Hope to see you in.

    Happy Thursday.
    xoxox

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