Affinity


 

For M and for friendship
 
 

You broad-shoulder me to the beach,
pillow-creased and yawning,
our winter-beaten faces
upturned to the burn.
 

Lungs gather up the onshore Sou’westerly;
its briny tang caffling in our hair
as we skim ‘ducker’ stones
and watch the storm petrels scatter.
 

Noon finds us knee-deep
in the mud-silt sand,
elbow to elbow, giggling,
digging for clams.
 

Blistering afternoon slips slowly
down the cool throat of the sky
and as we trickle our way home
something resembling peace
hovers.
 
 

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7 responses to “Affinity

  1. smiles…sounds like a beautiful day at the beach…ah i need some beach time…the smell of the air coming off the waves…and just to hear their rhythm…

  2. lovely imagery.

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  3. Beach time with a good friend 🙂 LOVE IT!

    Now I jealous.

    Calling friends now….

  4. Julie, this is a wonderfully lyrical tribute to the best kind of friendship. It feels within reach..and so real. You control the mood with such well-chosen language – sound and meaning in clear harmony. How apt. 🙂

  5. Shawna

    These lines are so creative:
    “You broad-shoulder me”
    “upturned to the burn”

    “as we trickle our way home
    something resembling peace
    hovers” … Love the ending; we all know it couldn’t possibly be actual peace because that is far too fleeting, if it even truly exists at all. That’s how it feels sometimes, at least. 🙂

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